When it’s time to tighten a scene, study your characters’ thoughts and feelings and ask yourself what purpose they serve. If they don’t help your readers understand the character’s motivations, consider cutting those lines.
Every writer has strengths and weaknesses. A writer who is a natural at dialog may struggle with action or description or something else. My Achilles’ heel is narrative summary—in all its many forms. (Arrrg!) That is a problem, because every book has narrative summary.
When it’s done well, readers don’t even notice the summarizing. It just seems like a natural part of the story. But if it’s not done well, it sticks out—like mustard on ice cream. Continue reading
Another month has passed since our Write by Midnight challenge ended. We hope you’re still sticking to your daily writing habits. In May, think about how to make the most of the writing time you have. Try this technique:
- Determine how much time you want to write on any given day. 30 minutes? An hour?
- Now, set a timer for half of that time. Write freely until the timer lets you know to stop. Just get the scene on the page.
- Then, reset the timer for a second round. This time, go back through what you wrote and make it make sense. Flesh out the scene with description, introspection, dialogue or whatever else you think the scene needs to be worthy of your name on the cover.
What do you spend the most time working on?
- * Character Names
- * Setting Details
- * Scene Locations